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Re: Proofread For Accuracy - Please
In a message dated 4/4/99 9:28:42 PM Eastern Daylight Time,
rmarlin@network-one.com writes:
<< I didn't see any obvious mistakes, but in the original letter you might
have
done more to grab their interest. Giving the impression that meteorites are
actually findable, like mentioning GB, which was found by metal detectorists
but frequently mistaken for 'hot rocks' and tossed out, would grab their
attention. >>
This will definitely be added to the letter, Thanks Gene :-)
George Nicula
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